Days I Remember Doo Wop Surf

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frundmragone Joined: Apr 17, 2015 Posts: 120	Posted on Mar 22 2023 12:32 PM https://soundcloud.com/user-432555153/days-i-remember-doo-wop-surf Hey guys just looking for somebody to take a listen to this being so young alot of my peers at 23 have no interest in this kind of music. Surf has always been a big love of mine would love to hear some comments or feedback. Thank You Love this community. Top
chiba Joined: Sep 02, 2022 Posts: 538 Central VA	Posted on Mar 22 2023 12:41 PM cool sounding track - keep it up! — -- Project: MAYHEM -and- Moonbase Surficalus by Hypersonic Secret now available! Top
cirecc Joined: Mar 06, 2006 Posts: 311 seattle, wa	Posted on Mar 22 2023 12:53 PM Sounds great for just getting into it! I’m not sure how much/what kind of feedback you want. First, do whatever you want and think is best, my feedback just comes from what I would do if it were my composition. I feel like what you wrote sounds great, I like the different parts and the mood of it. If it were mine, I might feel like I’m stretching the length a bit without there being something more drastically different in it. I might look to consolidate it down to closer to 2:30-2:45 instead of 3:23 - or do that and then add a dramatic bridge. You do something different each section, so maybe just combine some of those changes? I like the drum break though. Anyway, it’s really nice to listen to, so please don’t take this as a complaint by any means. It’s good as is though and is your own work, so do what makes you happy first. — -Eric New music! https://thedesolatecoast.bandcamp.com/releases Spotify Also: https://theverb.bandcamp.com/ https://www.facebook.com/theverbseattle/ Top
frundmragone Joined: Apr 17, 2015 Posts: 120	Posted on Mar 22 2023 11:43 PM This is exactly what i did want brother thank you! Ive been playing surf since a kid but im nowhere near you and some of the veterans on here just wanted to get active make a few friends and grab a few pointers! Top
cirecc Joined: Mar 06, 2006 Posts: 311 seattle, wa	Posted on Mar 23 2023 06:58 PM Great! I know that I got a lot of great feedback from people back in the day, so hopefully I can pay it forward. — -Eric New music! https://thedesolatecoast.bandcamp.com/releases Spotify Also: https://theverb.bandcamp.com/ https://www.facebook.com/theverbseattle/ Top

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