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GangsterNo1
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Link Posted on Jul 19 2013 10:19 AM

Hi all, long time lurker from the UK here. I've taken the plunge and had my first ever try at writing, playing and recording a surf(ish) song. All done by me in my man cave using the PC and my guitars. Only the drums are borrowed from the digital ether.

I know I have a long way to go, this is just an idea that needs fleshing out, and my recording / mixing skills are at a rookie level. Let me know what you think, but pull the punches just a little ;)

https://soundcloud.com/jc-autos/spaghetti-surf

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Surf_Skater
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Link Posted on Jul 19 2013 04:01 PM

Great job. I could see maybe adding some keyboards or sax to change it up a little. But it's darn good for messing around with a PC in the man cave Smile

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ParkRowe
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Link Posted on Jul 22 2013 10:32 AM

i like it... very cool main riff!

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LittleKahunaCraig
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Link Posted on Jul 22 2013 01:58 PM

Nice song. Good effort! You may consider a baritone or bass VI for your riff/solo at around 1:00 and again at the end of the song. That would bring more spaghetti into the surf!

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HallmarkSweptWinger
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Link Posted on Jul 22 2013 02:26 PM

Yes, I like it. You got the right feeling for the music. I like the coolness factor. You played not too much to fill every second, this is good!
The tempo is good. What I miss is a little different part more with a few different harmonies, a little second melody or something... I don`t know exactly...
...but at last it works in this way.
Go! More!

...everybody sit down, practice! (I do!) Smile
Have fun!

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Last edited: Jul 22, 2013 14:27:54

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GangsterNo1
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Link Posted on Jul 22 2013 05:24 PM

Thanks for feedback guys, really appreciate it.

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