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http://m.soundcloud.com/thekidforever/belle
The beginnings of an idea. Thoughts? Apologies for bad sound and sloppy playing.

IMO.

Bad sound is forgivable, but the sloppy playing makes it almost impossible to hear what you're trying to do here. I'd try it again Altar.

Danny Snyder

"With great reverb comes great responsibility" - Uncle Leo

I am now playing trumpet with Prince Buster tribute band 'Balzac'

Playing keys and guitar with Combo Tezeta

Formerly a guitarist in The TomorrowMen and Meshugga Beach Party

Latest surf project - Now That's What I Call SURF

Thanks. Sorry, it was 12:00 and I was laying down. I don't know what I was thinking. I have a different idea I'll try later. This wasn't any good.. Perhaps I'll run through it again later?

I also notice that it was too bassy and had too much fake reverb.

IMO.

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