Rob_J
Joined: Sep 29, 2007
Posts: 500
Sacto, CA
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 02:55 PM
I’ve been frustrated with trying to write original songs. It seems like every time that I think that I’ve come up with anything even remotely original, I listen back after a little time goes by and hear the same thing that I’ve heard a thousand times in someone else’s song.
When it comes down to it, aren’t ALL songs are made up of the same notes arranged in predictable ways that work together, in phrases that have a certain logic to them? And isn’t there a somewhat limited number of ways to structure a song in a way that makes sense? It seems (to me) almost impossible to arrange any particular idea into a structure that hasn’t already been done over and over.
When I listen to a surf station that plays lots of songs from groups that I’ve never heard before, I can hear a new song and predict with pretty good accuracy exactly where it’s going before I hear it.
It seems like everything that can be done has already been done and coming up with something that sounds different is almost impossible.
But with all of that said, every now and then I’ll hear something that sounds great and wonder how the song writer came up with it.
For you guys who write, how do you go about finding a way to write something that isn’t just a repetition of the thousands of other songs in that particular genre? Is there a process or a certain way of thinking that steers you in a direction that produces positive results?
I haven’t given up but seem to be chasing my tail. Help me if you can.
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derekirving
Joined: Nov 03, 2011
Posts: 660
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 02:58 PM
While it may be hard to hide one's influences to write an original song (that doesn't sound like anyone else) it IS possible to write good songs.
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Rob_J
Joined: Sep 29, 2007
Posts: 500
Sacto, CA
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 03:30 PM
Thanks, and yes I KNOW that it's possible. I hear stuff from several of the bands here on 101 that is really good. I just don't seem to be able to figure out how to go about coming up with something good myself.
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JakeDobner
Joined: Feb 26, 2006
Posts: 12159
Seattle
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 03:31 PM
You have to stop thinking about the "this part" and the "that part". Too many surf songs these days have the glissando bit and even more have the Man or Astro-Man? chord bit.
Getting rid of the surf beat is another sure way to make it fresh.
But honestly put some melodies into the song and into the chord progression itself. That is original enough for surf.
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Johnny_Z
Joined: Nov 02, 2010
Posts: 97
Austin, TX
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 03:50 PM
This has nothing to do with surf music, but PBS produced a video called "How to Be Creative" that I think hits the nail on the head (especially the 'Nothing is Original' segment which I immediately thought of after seeing your post).
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Badger
Joined: Nov 16, 2013
Posts: 4536
Wisconsin
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 04:58 PM
Johnny_Z wrote:
This has nothing to do with surf music, but PBS produced a video called "How to Be Creative" that I think hits the nail on the head (especially the 'Nothing is Original' segment which I immediately thought of after seeing your post).
Thanks. Found that interesting. I think the cognitive phase discussion can apply in many endeavors beyond the traditional arts. One of the finest mission planners I knew in the Army - when faced with a particularly tough nut to crack - used that, and it was some decades ago. No pun intended on the "nothing is original" tangent; but it worked. The incubation period (he actually called it that) is essential to have that illumination (the "ah hahh" moment), as well as a break from the voracious vacuuming up of info he would collect beforehand in the "Preparation" talked about in the video.
Then again, there are those who "Bang!" literally hear a whole song, completely arranged, and can rush to a personal recording device and lay it out. (Whereas someone like Hemingway had to establish a discipline of working so many hours each morning.) Runs the gamut I suppose. I'm still learning to play; just stuff I've observed as applied to other things.
Influences are going to be influences, even if subtle. How many great songs have a certain recognizable scale (or a piece of Malaguena)? Maybe putting a little different twist on something predictable like Jake mentioned can be helpful, dunno. It's a neat thought-topic & an area where I am bereft.
— Wes
SoCal ex-pat with a snow shovel
DISCLAIMER: The above is opinion/suggestion only & should not be used for mission planning/navigation, tweaking of instruments, beverage selection, or wardrobe choices.
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murph
Joined: Dec 16, 2010
Posts: 341
Chapel Hill, NC
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 05:01 PM
Hey Rob, I am no expert on songwriting but I totally feel your pain. As a novice guitarist, I feel even more trapped by my limited ability on what is arguably the instrument of choice for writing/playing surf music.
What has worked for me is similar to Jake's advice. I started worrying less about learning chord-shapes, scales, and techniques suitable for surf and focused more on exploring where a melody line might lead. I tend to stumble on these with guitar in-hand, completely by accident, as opposed to composing it out of thin air.
Other times I might come across a simple (and likely very common) chord progression that sounds cool to my ears. Things get even more interesting if a particular rhythm or strumming pattern breathes life into the progression. Whatever I end up with, I'll usually add it to my daily "strumming on the couch" repertoire. It may take a few days or even weeks, but more often than not a melody will start to emerge. It may end up being a verse or chorus or bridge, but the end result is at least a starting point for a complete song.
That's when the "real work" seems to start for me. It takes discipline to flesh out all the parts, come up with a beginning/ending, starts/stops, bass line, counter-melodies, etc. Do the parts work together? Is it interesting? Is it too similar to existing songs? Yes, there are many songs out there that share common elements (either by design or accident). But that's not always a bad thing! Plus we all hear things differently. What might sound unoriginal and cliche to your ears may sound fresh yet familiar to someone else.
I think the important thing is seeing the song through to completion. As you work on it (with guitar in hand, or simply playing it back in your head as you go about your day), imagine how you would like the song to sound. If it is sounding "too predictable" try altering something. Maybe the tweak will take it in a totally different direction or spark a few ideas.
Okay, so I've rambled on for several paragraphs about a process you are likely already following in some shape or form. While the process may be similar, we are all wired differently and I believe that the resulting composition (whether recorded or played live) stands a much greater chance of being unique than a cookie-cutter clone of something that has gone before. There's just too many steps and room for individual creativity/bias to affect the finished product!
So yeah, worry less and write more!
-murph
— http://www.reverbnation.com/elmiragesurf
http://www.reverbnation.com/aminorconspiracy
"I knew I was in trouble when the Coco-Loco tasted like water!" -- morphball
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Las_Barracudas
Joined: Apr 24, 2011
Posts: 1087
Surf City, NC
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 06:43 PM
Well... if it were easy everybody would be doing it . I think a lot of it has to do with the journey of creating itself, so don't give up.
If you listen to a lot of the traditional Surf you'll definitely hear that many of the original Surf bands "borrowed" from each other very heavily.
If you're trying to write a Surf tune, you really do have to utilize and incorporate already established techniques, sounds, effects, etc., in order to capture the vibe imho.
Often times your final product will remind a listener of another band and I / we have gotten the "hey that sounds like a blank tune." For me and my last band it was usually The Surf Raiders.
It definitely wasn't a conscious thing and structurally our songs were really much different than anything I've heard that they recorded, but I think it was more of an overall vibe / sound thing (if that makes any sense?).
I have been working on a song and deliberately nixed part of it because I thought it was just too much like something else that was already written. That's just the way it goes sometimes.
You also have to remember that different players and band members will contribute stylistically to the song and ultimately put their own stamp on it. So in the end even if the song structure is similar to something else it will likely sound different.
With that said, I have heard some modern bands that sound just too much like somebody else; almost like a tribute band. Not good.
— METEOR IV on reverbnation
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JObeast
Joined: Jul 24, 2012
Posts: 2762
Finknabad, Squinkistan
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 06:51 PM
To be able to create one has to make mistakes. I just discovered a chord I've never played before today by fingering an A barre chord wrong. The result (e-6/B) caught my ear and led to a new cycle of chords opening a new direction in the piece that's coming together after gestating a very long time.
To make fruitful mistakes you have to play enough and bend your ear to hear the permutating possibilities of the nascent idea as it takes form under your fingers. The fascination of discovery draws you into each piece as an unfolding mystery. I happen to like where my ear takes me - it's a weird place that is somehow nostalgic. I'm hearing the sound of my imagination and obsession, so of course it makes me happy to go there. Like that Christian Death song, Death Wish.
I often record fragmentary passages, just a few chords in series and much later find these disparate crumbs relate musically in tenuous ways that invite further work to bring them together into cohesion as a tune.
This is what creative improvisation is about - allowing musical fancy to unfold and listening to the color of that weirdness, responding to it with all the intellectual and intuitive tools you have to bring it back within the zone of rational comprehension. Hopefully this expands the area of your musical grasp.
Without continual learning there is no creativity. I think they are the same thing actually: when you are Learning, you are creating.
— Squink Out!
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DannySnyder
Joined: Mar 02, 2006
Posts: 11054
Berkeley, CA
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 07:17 PM
A lot of good advice here. I've written a lot about this in the past so I won't get too into it now, but here's one thing that often gets overlooked which can make a difference. Less experienced songwriters often put their effort into finding the notes in a melody. However, melody consists of notes and rhythm, and the rhythmic aspects to the melody can really be what makes it stand out. Sometimes you have to think like a drummer and listen to the time values of the notes, not the pitch.
Good luck!
— Danny Snyder
"With great reverb comes great responsibility" - Uncle Leo
Playing keys and guitar with Combo Tezeta
Formerly a guitarist in The TomorrowMen and Meshugga Beach Party
Latest surf project - Now That's What I Call SURF
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Rob_J
Joined: Sep 29, 2007
Posts: 500
Sacto, CA
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 07:25 PM
All good stuff, guys. I enjoyed the YT video about "how to be creative". Actually, being creative is not a problem for me. I've been an artist both in fine arts and graphic arts as well as a photographer for the last 40+ years. (Longer than that, really. Just don't like admitting my advanced age). Being creative is not foreign to me. It's just that songwriting is a new form of expression for me and proving to be quite a challenge. I have already recorded a few things and have several songs in the works. I just know they could be better. I appreciate all of the encouraging words and will definitely stick with it.
"I have been working on a song and deliberately nixed part of it because I thought it was just too much like something else that was already written. That's just the way it goes sometimes". Boy does that sound familiar.
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JObeast
Joined: Jul 24, 2012
Posts: 2762
Finknabad, Squinkistan
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 07:31 PM
I have to nix ideas that begin a process that will take way too long to resolve. I never, ever worry that a tune I write sounds derivative because everything is anyway, or it would sound like noise.
The limits I have to set are pragmatic ones: can this idea work out in 4 minutes? I wish. Could write 2 minute songs but the complexity I crave won't allow it.
— Squink Out!
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DannySnyder
Joined: Mar 02, 2006
Posts: 11054
Berkeley, CA
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 07:31 PM
Rob, be assured that most of us songwriters are sitting on many hours of rejected musical ideas. There's no short cuts to raising your ratio of good stuff to bad, you just have to put in the time. I find that even if I have my doubts, it's a good exercise and sometimes fruitful to work on a song to completion. Again, pay attention to the rhythm section, play with how it interacts with the melody. In surf that's very important too.
— Danny Snyder
"With great reverb comes great responsibility" - Uncle Leo
Playing keys and guitar with Combo Tezeta
Formerly a guitarist in The TomorrowMen and Meshugga Beach Party
Latest surf project - Now That's What I Call SURF
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Reverbenator
Joined: Jul 26, 2015
Posts: 259
San Diego, Ca
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 08:18 PM
If all you listen to are Surf songs with the predicable I-IV-V chord progression, then that's probably what will show up in your compositions.
I've been listening to music for about 50 years now, and I've listened to a lot of different types of music.
I can listen to my own compositions, and readily identify The Doobie Brothers, Wishbone Ash, and Eric Johnson, to name but just a few.
What comes out your (musical) head will likely be a reflection of what went into it.
Dave Wronski and Miles Corbin have no trouble writing original sounding Surf music.
-Less Paul, more Reverb-
— -Cheers, Clark-
-Less Paul, more Reverb-
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montereyjack66
Joined: Jul 23, 2014
Posts: 637
LA -ish
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 08:20 PM
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JObeast
Joined: Jul 24, 2012
Posts: 2762
Finknabad, Squinkistan
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Posted on Jun 22 2016 10:13 PM
This is so true. Memorable music even though derivative, is usually the result of cross-fertilization of several disparate languages. Bands that only listen to one kind of music sound 2 dimensional at best. Fear of defiling something pure has no place in art.
Reverbenator wrote:
If all you listen to are Surf songs with the predicable I-IV-V chord progression, then that's probably what will show up in your compositions.
I've been listening to music for about 50 years now, and I've listened to a lot of different types of music.
— Squink Out!
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LHR
Joined: Aug 23, 2006
Posts: 2123
The jungle
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Posted on Jun 23 2016 12:07 AM
This.
DannySnyder wrote:
A lot of good advice here. I've written a lot about this in the past so I won't get too into it now, but here's one thing that often gets overlooked which can make a difference. Less experienced songwriters often put their effort into finding the notes in a melody. However, melody consists of notes and rhythm, and the rhythmic aspects to the melody can really be what makes it stand out. Sometimes you have to think like a drummer and listen to the time values of the notes, not the pitch.
Good luck!
— SSIV
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blueruins
Joined: Mar 05, 2010
Posts: 362
Mauna Lani, HI
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Posted on Jun 23 2016 12:45 AM
Songs are funny little creatures...they can be conjured in so many different ways, but most of them have a way of bending you to their will even though we claim ownership.
The advice above about working through many failures is very sage. I probably have 10 mediocre ideas for every song I feel really good about.
One of my most productive techniques has been walking. There is something about the rhythm of movement that helps my musical mind work.
A great tool for me is to record the melody/riff/idea I'm infatuated with.
I just record it on my phone and let it end abruptly.
First I try to get a clear image in my head about my creation. What mood is it? Is it night or day? Alone or in a crowd? At a beach/in a car? Maybe it sounds like a wheelbarrow full of clawing metal rats sinking as they swiftly drift down a mercury river? Try to get a vivid picture In your head.
Walk around the block listening to your idea and try to hear what comes next. Maybe even better try to see what happens next and then imagine a soundtrack to that?
You can try singing along or whistling or just using your imagination. If you get something run home and try to capture it on your instrument.
There are no rules and you can keep fishing like that until you find something that inspires you.
Chase these ideas down and learn to express your images through your music.
They probably won't sound like many others.
— http://blueruins.bandcamp.com
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Syndicateofsurf
Joined: Oct 08, 2014
Posts: 1073
Northern Ohio
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Posted on Jun 23 2016 06:54 AM
I shouldn't but I can never resist this topic.
Short version: I've written songs ever since I learned my first 2 chords. I mean, that's just what you do. Much easier writing your own stuff rather than go through the pain of learning how to play someone else's stuff. You can't go wrong cause it's yours.
Original? Well there's a ton of advise on all that and a lot of it makes sense. I think of myself more as a lab rat than a musician. Locked in a school bus for 8-10 years for 1 1/2 hours a day with top 40 being pumped into my skull and all I wanted was to read my book.
It changed me. You can't expose a 6 year old kid to that kind of input and not have it affect them. I could give other details on my predisposition to outside stimuli but that would get tedious. BTW there are no other 'musicians' in my family; it was not something that was encouraged, quite the opposite.
2+ years into the surf/instro genre I currently put out a new song every 2 weeks. I have a couple hundred in my demo archive (an old MRS ZOOM studio)
and that is where I store ideas for future songs. Some of them go back a decade or more.
And I'm about 50/50 original to cover songs. Of course if I cover something I want to warp it in my own fashion (again, easier than playing it correctly. We ain't in a bar band right?)
I find major scales very productive places to find melodies but I inevitably fall back into the blues scales of my youth. And that pretty much covers my musical knowledge.
We all get the same 12 notes- you can arrange them any way you want.
Rok on.
— Da Vinci Flinglestein,
The quest for the Tone, the tone of the Quest
The Syndicate of Surf on YouTube
http://www.syndicateofsurf.com/
http://sharawaji.com/
http://surfrockradio.com/
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el_camello
Joined: Jul 04, 2010
Posts: 369
Ottawa
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Posted on Jun 23 2016 09:03 AM
Lots of good advise already but like Syndicateofsurf I can't resist adding some thoughts.
I don't think every surf song has to be all that unique (it does have to be good). Don't get me wrong, a creative unique original song is a what I aim for but a good song is a good song and we aren't just playing surf music for surf aficionados... there is a crowd of people who don't know anything about surf and just want to dance! I think there is something to be said about straight-up surf done well.
I find learning new songs by ear to be one of the best creative exercises. The more comfortable you are on your instrument the better and learning songs really help by getting you out of your comfort area.
The second thing I find extremely beneficial is jamming over progressions. I've been using band in a box and jamming over a variety of rhythms and chords that I would not naturally play over. I've written many melodies I would never have thought up of without the creative prompt and I can usually take these ideas and make them a bit more surf sounding. Also as someone quite new to improvisation I'm really enjoying recording my playing over these backing tracks and being surprised at what comes out (as opposed to deliberately trying to write something and predictably failing). Sure most of my improv is garbage but there is usually an idea worth developing. It's is greatly helping my confidence in playing with others.
Writing with others can help too. My band members aren't quite as... obsessed(?) with surf music as I am. Their way of playing contributes to making our music less typically surf. This can occasionally be frustrating due to previously mentioned surf obsession but is ultimately better for the music I find.
— -Pierre
The Obsidians! (Ottawa surf)
The Obsidians debut EP
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