thiago2k5
Joined: Mar 19, 2015
Posts: 3
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Posted on Mar 19 2015 09:13 AM
Hello!
I just found these forums and I thought I'd get some feedback from y'all.
I'm new at composing surf music, but an experienced listener lol.
https://soundcloud.com/thiago2k5/surfin-roaches-adrift
I know I still need to work on it, specially with the drums. But if you could give me some feedback, that'd be nice.
Thanks!
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CrazyAces
Joined: Jul 31, 2012
Posts: 4052
Nashville, TN.
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Posted on Mar 19 2015 09:53 AM
Welcome to SG101 thiago2k5.
Sounding good!
One tip: try using different amounts of Reverb on the various guitar parts or even very little on some. This way the rhythm, tremolo or lead parts will stand out more.....
Cheers,
Jeff
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thiago2k5
Joined: Mar 19, 2015
Posts: 3
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Posted on Mar 19 2015 12:01 PM
CrazyAces wrote:
Welcome to SG101 thiago2k5.
Sounding good!
One tip: try using different amounts of Reverb on the various guitar parts or even very little on some. This way the rhythm, tremolo or lead parts will stand out more.....
Cheers,
Jeff
Thanks a bunch for your feedback, Jeff! I really appreciate it.
I'll keep that in mind when I record my next project and I'll make sure to post it here.
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Noel
Joined: Mar 15, 2011
Posts: 8528
Back in Piitsburgh, Pennsylvania, where I grew up.
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Posted on Mar 19 2015 12:03 PM
Welcome to sg101, thiago2k5! Very glad you're here.
— This is Noel. Reverb's at maximum an' I'm givin' 'er all she's got.
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HallmarkSweptWinger
Joined: Jul 27, 2006
Posts: 1284
Berlinesia, Germanifornia
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Posted on Mar 19 2015 12:09 PM
Hey, welcome!
Sounds very good!
But after 2 minutes it is done for me...
I miss another part in this song.
Or just end it earlier. After 2 minutes I am getting bored...
There are many many surf songs with only 2 minutes and that`s it!
And maybe work on the lead melody. A bit catchier would be fine.
For me it is not a question of reverb there or there. A lot of reverb is always good.
My opinion.
— Twang cheers!
Ralf Kilauea
www.kilaueas.de
https://kilaueas.bandcamp.com/album/touch-my-alien
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thiago2k5
Joined: Mar 19, 2015
Posts: 3
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Posted on Mar 19 2015 12:37 PM
Noel wrote:
Welcome to sg101, thiago2k5! Very glad you're here.
Thanks, Noel!
HallmarkSweptWinger wrote:
Hey, welcome!
Sounds very good!
But after 2 minutes it is done for me...
I miss another part in this song.
Or just end it earlier. After 2 minutes I am getting bored...
There are many many surf songs with only 2 minutes and that`s it!
And maybe work on the lead melody. A bit catchier would be fine.
For me it is not a question of reverb there or there. A lot of reverb is always good.
My opinion.
Thanks for your feedback, HallmarkSweptWinger! I agree with all of your points above. Maybe I was aiming for a longer tune because of my composing patterns (I mostly compose thrash metal tunes, which last longer than 4 minutes). And the "lack of creativity" of the lead guitar is mostly because of my little experience in composing within this genre. lol. I'll keep'em coming! Thanks again.
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HallmarkSweptWinger
Joined: Jul 27, 2006
Posts: 1284
Berlinesia, Germanifornia
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Posted on Mar 19 2015 12:55 PM
Oh, you compose mostly thrash metal? Cool! I like Thrash Metal also!
I would be happy if I could play or compose it...
You know, at last there is no right or wrong in composing, if it sounds good it sounds good! If you like it, it`s good!
What do you think about getting some thrash metal elements into surf music?
(I remember the band Mr. Bungle for example, they mixed EVERYTHING. Swing R`n Roll, Exotica, Death Metal etc... Love it!)
— Twang cheers!
Ralf Kilauea
www.kilaueas.de
https://kilaueas.bandcamp.com/album/touch-my-alien
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