Posted on Sep 30 2014 04:22 PM
Daniel:
Great Songs! I know how hard it is to write instro tunes and have them be different but the same....
Here is my take as a fellow instro-song writer:
Everlasting and twilight: Could use some more dynamics on the guitar A sort of swell keeps listeners attention as well as space between the notes.
Rainbow: Dig the non-trad drums. Kudos to anyone who can incorporate weirdness into surf music. Same comment guitar could use some more dynamics.
Pilgrim: That hook bass line is the key. My favorite song. well done.
Knockout: Had a hard time getting past the Cure intro bass and melody. Awesome song but I still have the Cure in my head.
Monroe: Drums and guitar are both very busy. The guitar could maybe be simplified to not step on the drums
Fast Train: More bass. this one a total groover bring the bass out front.
Nightmare: Seemed weirdly syncopated. Gotta watch out for complex drums/16th and 32 drum beats with staccato picking. It is easy to get out of sync. Guitar could be simplified to avoid stepping on the drums.
Kruezberg: This song is awesome and could be backing music for any surf/skate/mountain biking vid. Well don.
Believe: Old school. Made me think of hot 60's chicks in bikinis..... Picture best fits the song.
All in all great job. Keep em coming. When I get mine posted you can rip into me to return the favor!
Hope that helps.
RobC