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If you have a few minutes, please give a listen to Sleep Walk. It's based on the Chantay's arrangement. (and it's in Db?)

This is my level best effort. I've been playing slide for about 2-3 months, so it's got a few rough spots. Mostly what I'm looking for are the big ticket items, as in "what should I work on next?"

(The backing has a lot of mistakes too, please ignore - it's scratch.)

ImaDirtyTroll wrote:

If you have a few minutes, please give a listen to Sleep Walk. It's based on the Chantay's arrangement. (and it's in Db?)

This is my level best effort. I've been playing slide for about 2-3 months, so it's got a few rough spots. Mostly what I'm looking for are the big ticket items, as in "what should I work on next?"

(The backing has a lot of mistakes too, please ignore - it's scratch.)

Very solid effort for 2-3 months in no doubt about it!

The 'elephant in the room', so to speak, is the notes cutting off. I notice it is pretty much for every phrase. Are you having trouble with sustain?

On spots where you hold the note a little longer, I notice the note kind of dies out & you are left with just a scrubbing sound. If this is why, I'd perhaps try to go for more gain & see if you can get the notes to hold out a little longer. You are doing the right thing by sliding slightly back & forth on the note to sustain it - was this recorded direct, with an amp simulator? If so, perhaps using an amp in the room, mic'd would fix the issue.

Are you playing a guitar or lap steel?

Are you in an open tuning or standard?

Is the harmony phrase an overdub?

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whistledixie wrote:

The 'elephant in the room', so to speak, is the notes cutting off. I notice it is pretty much for every phrase. Are you having trouble with sustain?

Not really trouble with sustain, it's more a trouble with damping.

On spots where you hold the note a little longer, I notice the note kind of dies out & you are left with just a scrubbing sound. If this is why, I'd perhaps try to go for more gain & see if you can get the notes to hold out a little longer. You are doing the right thing by sliding slightly back & forth on the note to sustain it - was this recorded direct, with an amp simulator? If so, perhaps using an amp in the room, mic'd would fix the issue.

This was recorded direct with an amp simulator, actually to bring out the mistakes. When I play through the amp it's usually loud enough to sustain, and also with a little reverb, which covers up a lot. (Also playing with other people covers up some more.)

Are you playing a guitar or lap steel?

That was played with a finger slide standing up, on a 335. I can play it a little better lap style using a bar, for me it's much easier to avoid hitting the frets and to control the vibrato.

Are you in an open tuning or standard?

Standard tuning, I'm not smart enough to learn the neck all over again. No

Is the harmony phrase an overdub?

It's a Maj 6th double stop. The melody at that point is F-G-Ab so I guess that would make the "harmony" Ab-Bb-Cb? I don't know music theory, but that probably doesn't work in the key of C. I think some versions have a chord passage there, I'll have to look into that some more.

Thanks for the feedback.

Last edited: Oct 01, 2012 16:01:45

gain & reverb to 'smooth' things out is something we all do - not really a mistake cover, but just a tool at our disposal. even the pros use effects to make things sort of blend together - reverb is obviously common in surf music, but delay is very common in all lead guitar playing to help prevent awkward gaps between notes when moving around the neck.

I asked about the harmony phrase being an overdub because it sounds like you have a track in there just for that 1 phrase.

You can use standard on this, but open tuning really helps for Sleep Walk, especially in that harmony phrase, but also overall - but I understand it is tricky sometimes trying to wrap your head around a new tuning.

If I were you, the only thing I would do is work on sustaining the notes out longer, instead of cutting them off. All of this is a matter of personal tastes, obviously, but I think the cutting off of the notes throughout is a little jarring, letting them ring out helps the flow of the song, IMO.

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btw, I actually have spent the past several weeks working on this very tune for our next show - I do it on lap steel & use an open Cm7 tuning.

but like I said before, for only a few months of practice on the instrument - this is a great performance!!!

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Yeah steel guitar is cool and someday in the future I'd like to get into that stuff, but a man's gotta know his limitations. I'm just a hobbyist (obviously) and on a good week I have maybe 10 hours of practice time. I have to keep it focused on the big ticket items.

Actually, practicing slide is improving my knowledge of the neck. I've tried my hand at blues improvisation in the past, I have a bad habit of getting into one scale pattern, and then getting stuck in one position. That seems to be a common trap. The slide forces you to think along the strings as well as across the strings.

ImaDirtyTroll wrote:

Yeah steel guitar is cool and someday in the future I'd like to get into that stuff, but a man's gotta know his limitations. I'm just a hobbyist (obviously) and on a good week I have maybe 10 hours of practice time. I have to keep it focused on the big ticket items.

Actually, practicing slide is improving my knowledge of the neck. I've tried my hand at blues improvisation in the past, I have a bad habit of getting into one scale pattern, and then getting stuck in one position. That seems to be a common trap. The slide forces you to think along the strings as well as across the strings.

Absolutely! Dick Dale's Mexico & Miserlou are good for this too - I don't know how other's play them, but I stay on 1 string all the way through Miserlou from beginning to end of each melodic passage. And with Mexico, I stay mostly on the G & B strings - that's a great one for teaching harmony leads too! There's a great Hawaiian standard called Dobro Chimes that is also great in the same manner as Mexico - I learned it years ago & the return on investment for that one has been amazing! Smile

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