Voodoocurse
Joined: Jan 13, 2009
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Posted on Aug 23 2012 07:43 AM
Hi!
Would be nice with som feedback on this song I´m currently working on. No intro yet, but got some ideas. Feel like it might be much too similar to another song, but can´t figure out which one...
Badly played and badly recorded, I know.
"In progress"
Thanks!
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psychonaut
Joined: Dec 08, 2007
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Posted on Aug 23 2012 07:58 AM
That's a really cool riff! The first couple of notes sounds like you're going to play 'Intoxica', but it's different from there so I wouldn't worry about that. I think maybe a drum intro similar to 'Squad Car' and then the rest of the band joining in chugging along on the E like you do between the verses might be a good way to start it. It's pretty straightforward so I wouldn't over-arrange it. Nice work!
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Voodoocurse
Joined: Jan 13, 2009
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Posted on Aug 23 2012 08:17 AM
psychonaut wrote:
That's a really cool riff! The first couple of notes sounds like you're going to play 'Intoxica', but it's different from there so I wouldn't worry about that. I think maybe a drum intro similar to 'Squad Car' and then the rest of the band joining in chugging along on the E like you do between the verses might be a good way to start it. It's pretty straightforward so I wouldn't over-arrange it. Nice work!
Thanks, means a lot!
A "Squad Car"-ish drum intro is a very good idea, think that would fit well. You´re right about not to over-arrange also. I often feel like there is something missing when I make music, but this time I`ll keep it simple.
Last edited: Aug 23, 2012 09:28:23
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Gnome
Joined: Aug 31, 2012
Posts: 8
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Posted on Sep 02 2012 01:47 PM
I like what you are doing
Last edited: Sep 02, 2012 13:47:31
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Voodoocurse
Joined: Jan 13, 2009
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Posted on Sep 07 2012 11:51 AM
Gnome wrote:
I like what you are doing
Thanks! Ditto!
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